Showing posts with label elves. Show all posts
Showing posts with label elves. Show all posts

Monday, November 3, 2025

A Children's Book or Not

In the Company of Elves, a children’s book I wrote in the 2000s and published in 2009, was revised in 2018 and is now available on Amazon. I see it as suitable for readers aged ten and up, although it wasn’t quite what a family member had in mind when she suggested I write for kids. Her recommendation seemed to stem from her belief that my first book, Chandra’s Quest, lacked engagement, despite it being targeted at young adults. Ironically, after I published In the Company of Elves, I received no feedback from her—just silence. I know she must have seen it online since I’ve shared the link multiple times, which led me to think her idea of a children’s book leaned more towards younger audiences, perhaps with fewer words and more illustrations. While her suggestion might have been a bit sarcastic, it ultimately pushed me to improve my writing. In those early days, I often felt overlooked as a "real" writer or author.

Family can often be our toughest critics, but I believe I've made significant progress since my early writing days. I've released several books, including low-content ones, and my advice to fellow writers is simple: create what you love. Don’t let others' opinions dictate your writing path or deter you from crafting your next great story. Remember, not everyone will resonate with your work, and that's perfectly okay. If someone doesn’t appreciate it, that’s their loss.

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Tuesday, December 24, 2024

Chapter 1 Excerpt from, In the Company of Elves

 


(An excerpt from the first chapter of In the Company of Elves)

As she walked along the path, she sang a tune from a song she heard on the radio:

“Hey, soul sister
Ain't that Mr. Mister on the radio, stereo
The way you move ain't fair, you know
Hey, soul sister.”

Melissa walked east from the patio towards the old oak tree and spotted a white rabbit sniffing along the wall’s bottom edge. She paused and gazed intently. Her brow furrowed, and a perplex look crossed her face. When she moved nearer to the rabbit, it glanced up at her and began to dig wildly, as if trying to burrow beneath the wall. “What is it doing and how did it get into the yard?" she mused.

“Hey little fellow, what are you doing here? Where did you come from?” The rabbit stopped and stared at her. Its nose twitched, and the rabbit went back to digging, determined to get to the other side. Melissa scratched her head. “You must be one of the neighbor’s pets. How curious,” she said. As she inspected the wall, she noticed a door obscured by vines.

 "Where did this door come from? I never noticed it before." The rabbit froze, its black eyes looked up at her. She leaned in closer and started pulling the vines off the door and uncovering it.

Her hands ended up with a few scratches, but what she found was amazing. Her eyes widened; her mouth dropped. “Wow, this door looks ancient,” she exclaimed and touched the door. An unsettling realization washed over her as she beheld the indiscernible writing etched across the upper edge.

“This is weird, maybe grandma didn’t know about this door, I guess,” she pondered.  “This door seems to be pretty old little fellow," she said as she looked down at the rabbit. The rabbit looked up at her and twitched its nose. Suddenly the rabbit scratched the door, as if it was trying to tell her to open it. She got the impression that it understood what she was saying, and she sensed intelligence behind those black eyes. Melissa spotted a lock on the ground, picked it up and looked at it carefully. “Wow, how weird!” she paused.
 “I wonder how old this is?” she said and sighed, “I guess someone must have unlocked the door. But who? This is truly a unique lock.” She had butterflies in her stomach and felt a little uneasy, though she couldn't quite put her finger on why. A wave of dread washed over her, but it was tangled up with a strong sense of curiosity. Melissa raised her eyes and stared at the door for a moment. It beckons her, coaxing her to open it. Something about it piqued her curiosity even more than normal. She gulped, "You know, I wonder what’s on the other side," she said out loud. One of the rabbit’s ears twitched as Melissa slowly opened the door.  

Thursday, December 12, 2024

In the Company of Elves

 


One of my favorite works is "In the Company of Elves." Although it is categorized as a children's book for readers aged 10 and up, I initially penned it in 2006 and released the first edition in 2009. Subsequently, I revised the text during the 2010s, resulting in the publication of the second edition. At this moment, I am conducting a final revision of the book. I am eliminating certain sketched images and incorporating new ones. The back cover will feature an illustration of Arowyn and Melissa. In the upcoming weeks, I will provide a link to the updated version of the book. Please check my Linktree to explore my books available on Amazon and Google Play.





Sunday, October 8, 2023

Excerpt from In the Company of Elves

 




Chapter 5: Melissa & the Seven Elves

 

   Morning broke, and Melissa was the last one to rise. She rubbed her eyes and looked around. Keefe’s bed was made, and Fagan’s sleeping bag and pillow lay neatly on a chair in the corner of the room near the window. She found her dress on Keefe’s bed. Arowyn and the others were not in the room. Everyone was up early. Melissa could hear talking and the sweet smell of breakfast.

 “I wonder what elves eat,” she thought as she slipped on her dress eager to find out. She found a brush on top of a chest drawer in the room and combed her hair.

 “I hope they don’t mind me using this,” she said to herself. “After all I came unprepared for this trip.” She grimaced and rolled her eyes, letting out a soft sigh. A soft knock sounded at the door.

 “Milady, breakfast is ready.” Nolan said. Melissa smiled. She joined the elves at the table. Breakfast was interesting. There were vegetables, lightly toasted mushrooms, along with large grubs and freshly baked bread. A pitcher of water was next to another pitcher with raspberry juice. Scrambled eggs were on a long platter ready for eating. Melissa is intrigued.

“Where do you keep your chickens?” She asked. “The chickens belong to the community, and they are in a chicken coop in the far side of the village.”

She did not see bacon or ham. “Don’t you guys ever eat ham, bacon or sausages?” Nolan’s eyes shot open, and he shook his head. “We do not eat meat,” he responded. “Most elves are vegetarian, however in this community, we occasionally eat fish,” Adain added.

“Oh, so you are Pescatarians?” asked Melissa.

“I suppose we are. We Elves are a race of beings that have a great respect for life,” said Nolan. “Paradoxically some of the greatest assassins and knights in all of history have been elves, not to

mention some of the best archers in the world,” Keefe said. “Wow I didn’t know,” said Melissa, intrigued by what he revealed. She ate her breakfast as if she had not had breakfast in a long time. “Going through that wormhole or whatever it was, really made me hungry,” she stated. The sauce is quite good, made of natural herbs and vegetables. Melissa did not touch the wine. She drank the raspberry juice that Nolan made instead. Something tastes like tofu, but she isn’t quite sure what it is, nevertheless she enjoyed her breakfast very much.

“Who cooked the breakfast? It is good.” She said, as she finished her drink.

“Arowyn cooked this meal,” said Demetrius. Melissa smiled at Arowyn and winked approvingly. Arowyn smiled back with a twinkle in his eyes. Later Melissa spoke to Arowyn about her stay with them.



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Friday, November 26, 2021

In the Company of Elves: Epilogue

 


Epilogue

Two years later, Melissa discovered she was expecting. She welcomed a lovely daughter named Marina into the world. Arowyn beamed with pride as a father. Marina, like her mother Melissa, is a quarter-elf. Long ago, Melissa’s grandmother had a secret affair with Auril during one of her visits to Agartha. When she found herself pregnant, she persuaded Melissa’s grandfather that the child was his and accepted it as a fact. Believing Trista was his daughter; he remained unaware of the hidden portal to another realm.

 

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Melissa made an annual trip to visit Arowyn with her daughter, Marina. Meanwhile, back home, people often speculated about why she had never tied the knot with the man who fathered her child. She chose to remain single. Her father was deeply troubled by what he perceived as an injustice, envisioning a deadbeat who had left Melissa to fend for herself and their daughter. He wished for a different life for her, one where she wouldn’t have to raise a child alone. However, many women successfully navigate single parenthood, and so her father and stepmother offered their support whenever they could. Marina very rarely got sick, and the pediatrician found it extraordinary but assumed that Marina is a product of healthy parents. Family and friends often asked about Marina’s father, but Melissa would simply respond, “He moved away,” effectively ending the conversation with those three words. She believed, “No one needs to know, and honestly, they wouldn’t comprehend,” as she kept her thoughts to herself. In the years that followed, Carly tied the knot with a lawyer named Peter, and they welcomed children into their lives. Carly maintained her friendship with Diego until his tragic passing in his late 70s. Meanwhile, Melissa kept in touch with Carly. Melissa received the heartbreaking news from her eldest son that she had Dementia. It was incredibly painful for her to witness her closest friend slowly fade away, yet she remained committed to visiting her every month until the very end. During those visits, Melissa shared tales of Agartha with Carly, confident that her friend would keep these secrets safe, as she would likely not remember. Melissa recounted her thrilling adventures in Agartha, and while Carly found joy in the stories, they quickly slipped from her memory. There were moments when she looked at the unfamiliar woman sharing these enchanting tales and wondered who she was. Melissa is now 80, her father has long passed on and died of a heart attack. Her stepmother remarried several years later and moved away but they corresponded frequently until her death. Melissa inherited the house where she brought up her daughter. her husband moved in with Melissa, creating a multi-generational home.

Despite being eighty years old, Melissa appears to be in her sixties due to her elf heritage. “Mom, thank you for letting me meet my real dad many years ago. I was blown away to find out that he is an elf—a real elf,” said Marina.
She served Melissa a steaming cup of Chamomile tea. Melissa propped up on her bed with a pillow supporting her back, she turned her gaze toward her daughter. Marina inherited Arowyn’s hair and his striking deep blue eyes, which sparkled with an enchanting vibrancy. “Your great-grandmother had knowledge of Agartha, and I have a little secret to share. Your grandmother has elf blood, just like you and me. I take great pride in being your mother.” She wrapped her arms around Marina in a warm embrace.

“I suppose that’s why you look so youthful, Mom, thanks to your elven lineage,” Marina teased. Indeed, Melissa appeared significantly younger than her years. “I trust you realize that this time, I won’t be coming back, dear,” Melissa said, her voice heavy with emotion. “I understand that father is waiting for you, and I’ll be there to see you off, but I must return, as you’re already know why,” Marina paused. “Also, Johnny is eager to join us when I take you to Agartha. He wants to see grandpa again.” Melissa nodded in agreement. Johnny had gone to Agartha numerous times with his mother since childhood, yet he had never mentioned Agartha to his father. Marina’s son is asleep, and David, her husband, is in their bedroom, watching television. Melissa understands the weight of carrying such a secret because for years she did the same.

“Remember, David must never know about Agartha. It must remain a secret forever. When outsiders know about the gate, the door will close forever,” she paused. “There is no coming back.” Marina nodded and said, “I understand.”

“In a safety deposit box at the bank, is my secret journal and the key. It has all the details about my adventures in Agartha. Maybe one day, you can write a book and tell the story. The key must remain in your possession and passed down to your son.” Marina nodded. Melissa placed the cup on the nightstand next to her bed and said, “I feel sleepy now.” She stretched her arms up and laid herself down and rested her head on the pillow. Soon she started to snore. Marina left the night light on, in her room. Melissa was reluctant to close her eyes in the dark. The shadows brought back memories of the creature she had encountered in the castle. On her 81st birthday, a celebration was held in her honor, surrounded by family and friends. It was a truly unforgettable gathering, filled with joy, love, and the warmth of her loved ones.

Little did they know it would be her final celebration; she felt a sense of readiness to move on. A few days later, Marina, Johnny and Melissa went through the gate. Melissa's grandson, in his twenties, is eagerly anticipating a visit with his grandfather. Although Johnny isn't married, he does have a girlfriend and maybe one day he will marry her. Arowyn patiently awaited their arrival. He embraced both his daughter and grandson warmly before planting a heartfelt kiss on Melissa. Despite her grey hair and gentle wrinkles, her face radiated vitality and joy.

“He has not changed and remains handsome and distinguished as ever,” Melissa mused. Faye is still as youthful as ever. She fluttered around them chatting about almost everything she could think of as they headed to the village.

 “Father, will you take care of her?” Marina whispered as she glanced at Melissa.

“Of course. She is my life as you and Johnny are,” said Arowyn. A change started happening to Melissa after Arowyn kissed her. Her wrinkles faded; a more youthful appearance shadowed her face. Forty years have been shaved off her, she looks like she’s forty-one now.

 “Thank you, father,” said Marina with a smile. Arowyn knew that Marina wasn’t going to be able to see her mother every day, only once a year. Johnny and Marina stayed for a while but had to return home. She remembers what her mother told her, “The longer you stay in Agartha, the more you’ll forget where you come from.” Faye escorted them to the gate. “I will come visit every year,” Marina told Faye.

 “Of course,” Faye responded. “Please, if ever there is any kind of emergency don’t hesitate to call on us,” said Arowyn. “Of course, father,” Marina nodded. “Melissa will be in good hands. I promise,” Faye reassured her as they went through the gate and back home.

Side note: Marina does tell her husband about Agartha and that Melissa left to live in Agartha. She takes him to Agartha and he is bewildered over what he saw there. After some time, he comes to accept that his wife is half Elf and vows to keep the secret safe.

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Thursday, August 29, 2019

History of: In the Company of Elves



The history of my book, In the Company of Elves. Where do I start. Well, I guess I'll start at the beginning when the story was just written in a spiral notebook. At first it was just notes, later in 2003 I started putting the story together into a word document. I was inspired by fantasy books such as, Lord of the Rings, the Hobbit, the Shanara Chronicles and other fantasy books I've read throughout my life.



 I do want to mention that Alice in Wonderland and Wizard of Oz also played a part in my inspiration. Originally, when I was working on the story, I was uncertain about the title. I didn't know what to call it. I played with various titles. Agartha, Melissa's Journey, The Elves of Agartha and In the Company of Elves. I chose the the last one on the  list. 
 At first, I decided to make this book as a novelette, however in 2011 I changed my mind and during the time I was re-writing it, I added a few more chapters.
The original copy was 120 pages. Revised version is close to 200 pages. 

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2018
(the eBook was published in 2017)

Despite of going through writers block back in 2006 through early 2008, I was able to overcome it, but writer's block did set me back a bit. I finally completed re-writing In the Company of Elves and published it in 2018.

What I would want to see:
Since, In the Company of Elves is a juvenile/young adult book, I would love to see this in my local bookstores or anywhere Indie books are sold.




Here are some bookstores where you can find this book:
5225 Canyon Crest Dr Ste 30A-B
Riverside, CA 92507
17.1 mi
514 South Smith Avenue B113
Corona, CA 92882
26 mi
Tustin, CA 92780
37.2 mi
1200 S Coast Hwy # 105
Laguna Beach, CA 92651
37.8 mi
Irvine, CA 92612
39.4 mi

3729 E Foothill Blvd
Pasadena, CA 91107
58.7 mi

514 South Smith Avenue B113
Corona, CA 92882
20.9 mi
Los Angeles Int'l - Hudson News
Carson, CA 90746
22.3 mi
2850 Artesia Blvd Ste 101
Redondo Beach, CA 90278
28 mi
300 S Santa Fe Ave Ste M
Los Angeles, CA 90013

4331 Degnan Blvd
Los Angeles, CA 90008
31.4 mi

If you want a paperback copy, you can order it from Amazon or Barnes &Noble. However, if you live in the area where any of these bookstores reside, please feel free to visit and ask them about the book.

Tuesday, May 14, 2019

In the Company of Elves: What you Need to Know



As the author of, In the Company of Elves, I highly enjoyed writing this fantasy story. It is one of my full-length novels, other than the Chandra’s Quest trilogy books. Even though Chandra’s Quest was my first book, I was inspired to write, In the Company of Elves by watching movies like Legend, Willow, Lord of the Rings, Alice in Wonderland to name a few. I published In the Company of Elves in 2009 but started writing the story back in 2004/2005. Yes, I came up with the title for this book many years ago. The first copy of the book was published through Instant Publishers, a subsidiary company. It only had 120 pages. 



Then I decided to revise the book, so I re-wrote it and added more chapters to it. For those who have downloaded my book and enjoyed it, Thank you. If you have a paperback copy, thank you for purchasing it. I recently donated 1 copy to one of those Little Library Boxes, in Menifee Ca. If you read it as a Summer read, please be sure to leave a review on Amazon or on my Facebook page or Instagram. Thank you. 



NOTE: In July, I will be publishing The Other Side of Things Part 2. It is a non fiction book, with issues on Health, Social relations, Romance and Fashion.Visit my Facebook page and my Website for more info.