Showing posts with label chandras quest. Show all posts
Showing posts with label chandras quest. Show all posts

Thursday, August 27, 2020

First, Second or Third Person Narrative

 




Let’s talk about First person, second person and third person narrative.

First person narrative is a point of view (who is telling a story) where the story is narrated by one character at a time. This character may be speaking about him or herself or sharing events that he or she is experiencing—the use of first-person pronouns. Many stories and novels are written I the first-person point of view. In this kind of narrative, you are writing the character’s story by their perspective. You are writing their story through their eyes.

 


 Example: “I left my keys on the kitchen counter but now I can’t find them.”

Second Person Narrative:

  Second-person point of view belongs to the person (or people) being addressed.

The biggest indicator of the second person use is pronouns like: you, your, yours, yourself or yourselves.

Example: “If you eat these fruits you will find that your health is much better to combat illnesses.”



A self-help book is written in a second person narrative. There are a lot of self-help books out there and when you buy one, you’ll see the narration and how it’s written. These books are a dime in dozen and the writer is addressing the reader when they write.

 



Third Person Narrative:

The third-person point of view/narrative belongs to the person (or people) being talked about. The third-person pronouns include he, him, his, himself, she, her, hers, herself, it, its, itself, they, them, their, theirs, and themselves.

 Example: “Candy used her paycheck to buy herself a new dress.”

 Most popular books are written as a third person narrative but let’s talk more about first person narrative for a bit.

It is easy to write a book using first-person narrative/point of view. Take a look at Twilight and Fifty Shades of Grey, all of those books were written as first-person narrative.

Easy? Yes, the author publishes his/her book quicker, and are capable of producing several books within 6 months. Most of my books are written as a third person narrative, only The Secret Diary of a Gypsy Heart and Saints and Sinners: Affairs of the Heart are written as first-person narrative. My book Chandra’s Quest Book 1, the 2002 version, was written as a first-person narrative but when I decided to re-write the book, I chose third person narrative instead.

 Author’s that write as a first-person narrative, usually use what they know about the subject they are writing. Sometimes they will use personal experiences in their life and will use fractions of those experiences in their books.

  One of my sons told me that someone they know wants to write a book using first-person narration and use actual names of people he/she knows. Well, you cannot copyright your own name, or titles, or ideas, names are not copyrighted. The person who wants to write a fiction book can make subtle changes to the characters, like hair color, eyes, the character’s place of employment, relationship with other people or where they live. Making subtle changes can help avoid confusion and grievance.

Again, I want to state that names are not copyrighted. You cannot sue an author for using your name in his/her book. It would be considered frivolous and will not hold up in court, not even small claims. Food for thought.

The link below will give more info.


My books:

Saints and Sinners: Affairs of the Heart

Secret Diary of a Gypsy Heart

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Thursday, September 12, 2019

Older Books of Chandra's Quest


It's been 18 years since I first published Chandra's Quest and I still see some of the older unabridged version of the book in various online book stores. I am sure there are some local book stores that have them, only because I distributed some copies when I first published it. The original copy of Chandra's Quest appears on the list of books that I have up on my Author's page on Amazon and I really don't know how to remove it since I wasn't the one who posted it up on Amazon years ago. I feel that the 2002 version of the book will be on the list for many more years to come because the third party seller connected the book to the recent version of Chandra's Quest. When you scroll through my Author's page on Amazon, you'll see it. It's one of the last books on my list. I highly recommend that if you order Chandra's Quest-- order the recently revised copy. Below is the 2002 version's book cover image. Some third party sellers have a copy of this version. 


A few years back, someone emailed me to tell me that when they ordered the book by the seller that is selling it, they did not get the book they ordered. It was an entirely different book, not written by me.
 Of course, I explained to them that I am not responsible for what another third party seller sells. 
My suggestion to buyers is to ask the seller first if that is the exact book they are selling to avoid spending money on something they didn't order. 
If you want to purchase Chandra's Quest, please just purchase it through eBay, Amazon, Barnes & Noble and the other bookstores I suggested in a previous blog post. 

Where to Find my Books



2013

For those who have the 2013 revised version of Chandra's Quest, may I suggest you purchase or download the current book that has 154 pages. In 2016, I added four more chapters to the book, you may like to read it



Last but not Least:

I am currently selling a limited edition of Chandra's Quest with this book cover image (see below)


This book was published through CreateSpace before CreateSpace and Kindle merged back in 2017. This copy is a rare find because there are no other books with this image in distribution. 
Note: It does come with a typo or two. Current books don't have them. This book is signed by author. Please visit link to view where I'm selling the book.


A list of local book stores that carry some of my books. You may have to inquire about them to the clerk.

5225 Canyon Crest Dr Ste 30A-B
Riverside, CA 92507
17.1 mi
514 South Smith Avenue B113
Corona, CA 92882
26 mi
Tustin, CA 92780
37.2 mi
1200 S Coast Hwy # 105
Laguna Beach, CA 92651
37.8 mi
Irvine, CA 92612
39.4 mi 
3729 E Foothill Blvd
Pasadena, CA 91107
58.7 mi

514 South Smith Avenue B113
Corona, CA 92882
20.9 mi
Los Angeles Int'l - Hudson News
Carson, CA 90746
22.3 mi
2850 Artesia Blvd Ste 101
Redondo Beach, CA 90278
28 mi
300 S Santa Fe Ave Ste M
Los Angeles, CA 90013

4331 Degnan Blvd
Los Angeles, CA 90008
31.4 mi

Final note: Above all PLEASE do Read, Rate & Reveiw. All reviews are important to the author whether good or bad. Thank you.

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Saturday, July 27, 2019

History of Chandra's Quest



This is the history of  how Chandra's Quest came to be.



Chandra’s Quest was the first full length novel I wrote. 
It was 1996 when I started writing notes that I would use in the story. I  was inspired by sci-fi TV shows, movies and books, when I started writing my first book. The book was called, Shandara’s Journey when I started writing it. It was categorized as alternative sci-fi, adult book. Originally, the first two chapters of Chandra’s Quest, started out in a post-apocalyptic Earth after an alien invasion took place and devastated the major cities. Humans were taken to another solar system and became slaves to aliens that lived on those planets. After I finished writing Chandra’s Quest book 1, I realized that only a certain group of people would be interested in reading it, so I decided to make changes to the story before I published it.  I took out the most obvious adult content, then changed the title from Shandara’s Journey to Chandra’s Quest.


Why start the story at an alien brothel? This question was never asked but I thought I should bring it up. The main character had to start somewhere and as I stated before, the book itself, was an adult book before I made changes. I wanted it to be read by those who are 14 and older. 
I first published the book through Instant Publishers, a subsidiary publishing company. The book was written as a first-person narrative, based on the main character’s journals. For those who have read the Atlan Saga by Jane Gaskell, the main character from those books, carried a journal with her throughout her journey and the whole trilogy is based on her journals. I liked the concept of it, so I went with it for my book.




 I published Chandra's Quest Book 1 in 2002, I ordered several copies and distributed them to local small bookstores. I only donated them, I did not ask for any royalties from the sales of the books. Someone bought a copy of my book in 2004 and posted it on Amazon for sale. It was a third-party seller. He/she sent me an email and a link to my book. I then, signed up for Amazon as a seller and started selling the copies I had left. I sold a few copies. 
Later, I published book 2. Book 3 was still in the process of being written when in 2007 I decided to re-write the whole story. 
Why did I re-write it? Well it wasn’t because trolls made disparaging remarks in forums about my book, that's not the case and it would be ridiculous. I wasn't satisfied with it and I just felt I could do better. 


So, began the long process of re-writing the story. Chandra’s Quest book 1 the revised version was published through CreateSpace in 2013. 


I was going to make several novelette books out of the story but chose to just make three books as originally planned. In 2016, I revised book 1 again, adding a different book cover image and pulling some of Chandra's Quest Book 2 chapters and putting them into Book 1. 


When CreateSpace merged with Kindle Direct Publishing, I changed the book cover again but noticed a few typos in the book and changed the typos as well. Book 1 was complete and it’s for sale as an eBook and paperback, not just on Amazon but on Barnes and Noble.



 Chandra’s Quest Book 2 was easy to put together. Of course, I had to do much needed editing and in the end I was satisfied with the outcome. 



Book 3 is still in the works. Almost complete but it will be the editing that will determine how long it will take before publishing the book.



So, that’s the story of how Chandra’s Quest came to be. It was my first book so yes; I care about it and it took me awhile to put together. I am pleased with the end results.


What would I change if I could do it all again? Well, probably the first-person narrative idea. It only works for regular fiction or non-fiction, that’s just my opinion of course. 

Feedback:
The only feedback I got from someone who never really read Chandra’s Quest was from my cousin who said, “I don’t understand it.” 
Of course, her and I have been at odds with each other for as long as I can remember. I found that you get bias feedback from those that know you and don’t like you, verses people who are total strangers. But without their mean-spirited feedback, an author wouldn’t grow to be the best they can be.

Note: I will write the history of In the Company of Elves in my next entry. 




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Saturday, May 26, 2018

Sharing Links to My Book Web Pages



I am sharing links to all my books webpages. please feel free to visit. 
In the coming weeks, I will share more excerpts on my blog and share them on my Instagram.

Saints and Sinners: Affairs of the Heart

Chandra's Quest

In the Company of Elves

These books are now available for purchase. Visit my website to view up and coming books.

NOTE: The webpages for these books are now located with google sites.




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